Thursday, October 17, 2013

Traveller : Haiku



                                                        Backpacked and all set
                                                     Felt as if I missed something
                                                       Maybe spirits enough

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  1. Now that is pure wow.. Spirit is all you need!

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  2. Wow, amazing!! Never under estimate spirit!

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    1. Thanks Kathy!:)
      One should never underestimate the power of spirit.:)

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  3. Just Wow! And this makes me wish that I could write haiku too...

    P.S. First time here... and you got a wonderful space :)

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    1. Never knew even I could write one & now your feedback makes me wanna write more.:)
      Thanks Sheetal for stopping by!:)
      Much appreciated.:D

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  4. I really cannot do haiku..so respect!

    And maybe you missed your toothbrush ;))

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    1. Haha...maybe I did but then again who cares since I am busy with the Spirit thing :p
      Even this is my first Haiku attempt Apurva.
      So glad ,people are liking it.:D

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    1. Thanks!:)
      My first attempt did turn out to be a lil. worthy I guess :p

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  6. Lovely! Nice blog...will return to read more :)

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    1. Thanks for the wonderful feedback Ankita!:)
      Sure, always welcome!:) :D

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  7. Reminds me of the 'Leaving on an Airplane' song.

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    1. Well , I am certainly delighted to hear that.:D
      "Leaving on a jet plane" is an epic song indeed...glad this haiku reminds you of that!:):)

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  8. Wow Nikhil! More strength to you! You have got the most important thing!
    Let all embark with their spirit & win!

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    1. Thanks anita for your lovely comment!:)
      Yep..Spirit is all we need.:D:)

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  9. Nicely framed pic and it evoked very perfect lines.

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    1. Thanks a ton for your lovely feedback Indrani! :)
      Much appreciated.:D

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  10. I really don't read Haiku much coz I don't understand what it is.. but you seem to have made it look so clean and powerful.. maybe I should learn a bit more and try my hand at it.. :-)

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    1. Frankly speaking Vivek , same goes with me. I don't read Haiku much 'coz they seem crisp & to the point..& that is something that I am not good at. I have an uneasiness when it comes to summing up.:p
      Real glad that my first attempt at haiku is liked by you guys. And that makes me wanna write more of 'em!:D..Stay tuned :)

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  11. Perfectly fits with a Traveller..Spirits is after all take us to the places untravelled.. :D

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    1. True that , mate!:)
      Thanks for visiting Harsha!:D

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  12. I don't get Haiku's, must be deep things!
    photo badiya hain!
    great capture:)

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    1. Haha....Haiku's most of the time confuses me as well...not 'coz they are deep but 'coz they actually say alot in just three lines & that amazes me. Though my Haiku's not that top-notch , just tried to keep it simple.:). First attempt you know :p

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  13. Had to Google what Haiku is. Now that I am enlightened, all I have to say is well done! Also, a great capture. Write on :)

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    1. Ohh, you had to go through a lot of trouble for this post but I am real glad that you now know what a haiku is.
      Thank you Ipsita for visiting! :) :)

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  14. Lovely! Both the picture and the haiku! :)

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    1. :)
      Thanks Seeta for your kind feedback.:D

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  15. I usually don't get haiku but I understood this one. The pic is well chosen to complement the haiku.

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    1. I am very happy you got this one.:)
      Thank you!:)

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  16. Oh! Fantastic! Wow photograph! Beautiful lines! :D

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    1. Thanks Namrata for our lovely feedback.:)

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    1. Thanks a ton!:)
      Your visit's much appreciated.:D

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  18. Just one word for this one- I N C R E D I B L E

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  19. Nice words. Spirit is all U need :)

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  20. This is your first haiku? I am a haiku fan and this one is great!
    Keep haikuing;)

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    1. Yeah it is.
      I am actually overjoyed to see that a haiku lover thinks my haiku's great!:D :D
      Thanks for your valuable feedback. Means a lot :)

      Roger that! , i'l keep haikuing :)

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  21. Great! Captured the true spirit of a traveller!

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    1. I tried though.:)
      Glad you liked it Aditi!:D

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  22. Now, who says first timers cant be good ?? ;)

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    1. :p
      Thanks a ton Jyotsna for your lovely comment!:)

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