Thursday, December 19, 2013

Traveller : Haiku # 2


                                                                    Left another place
                                                       quite blurry when I look back
                                                                 Tear’s  thicker I guess

28 comments:

  1. Love that muddy lane in the mountain...

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    1. That makes two of us.
      That's the reason I decided to walk on it.:)

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  2. The last line is the highlight of this haiku!
    Beautifully penned Nikhil. Loved it :)

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    1. Yes it is Bhavya. :)
      Glad you loved it. :)

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    1. Thanx. Very happy that you feel this way. I tried. :)

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  4. Great attempt! Liked it! :)
    http://heywaitlistenblog.blogspot.in/

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  5. Tear is indeed thick when you look back but it clears your vision for your journey ahead ..Keep up the good work Nikhil ..loved it :)

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    1. Yes , you are right I guess :)
      Thanks for your lovely feedback Anonymous :) :)

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    1. Thank you for your lovely feedback Indrani. :)

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  7. Touching, highlights your love to travel! Very beautiful, Nikhil. :)

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    1. Ahh...thanks a ton for your lovely comment Arti. :D
      So glad you liked it. :) :)

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  8. Enjoy your haikus. Keep them coming! Wish you a very happy new year :)

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    1. Thanks a ton for your great comment.
      Wish you the same. Have a great year ahead! :) :D

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    1. Thank you Ankita!:)
      Glad you liked it. :D

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